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Comment if you fave please
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Please comment. Feedback and constructive criticism is really important to this project.
I'm looking for constrictive criticism on: consistency, realism of human proportion, panel layout and flow, text design, spelling and grammar, character and background design, colour design, shot composition, and the quality of the art in general.
I'm not looking for constrictive criticism on: premise, story structure and pacing, characterisation, character development, or plot.
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Pokemon (c) Nintendo
MLP (c) Hasbro
Pokemon Harmony and all characters created for the comic belong to me.
Page... pfff... I can't think of anything to say.
Please comment. Feedback and constructive criticism is really important to this project.
I'm looking for constrictive criticism on: consistency, realism of human proportion, panel layout and flow, text design, spelling and grammar, character and background design, colour design, shot composition, and the quality of the art in general.
I'm not looking for constrictive criticism on: premise, story structure and pacing, characterisation, character development, or plot.
Previous page: sarythewolf.deviantart.com/art…
Archive: sarythewolf.deviantart.com/gal…
Next page: To come
About the comic: sarythewolf.deviantart.com/jou…
Pokemon (c) Nintendo
MLP (c) Hasbro
Pokemon Harmony and all characters created for the comic belong to me.
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2893x4092px 1.71 MB
© 2017 - 2024 SaryTheWolf
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Save those souls Rarity... You know that a real pokemon master comes from their ability to train those criters and to wear elegant sport wearing!
(Also in the last panel, it is "I'll" be fine.)
(Also in the last panel, it is "I'll" be fine.)