Pokemon Harmony Page 13

Here we see that I need way more practice at leaving appropriate space for speech boxes. Oh well, better then the text being too cramped I suppose.

Please comment. Feedback and constructive criticism is really important to this project.
I'm looking for constrictive criticism on: consistency, realism of human proportion, panel layout and flow, text design, spelling and grammar, character and background design, colour design, shot composition, and the quality of art in general.
I'm not looking for constrictive criticism on: premise, story structure and pacing, characterisation, character development, or plot.

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